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Troosh
Amazing how much thought and poetry you squeeze into four short lines...
posted by
Nautikos
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August 29, 2008
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She could no longer pretend that he wasn't an idiot-
I love it! how often I've felt that way!!....
posted by
mejustme
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August 28, 2008
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I'd say you're good!..:) This is cool!
posted by
katray4
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August 28, 2008
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cute
at lest she came to her senses
posted by
YBSP1
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August 27, 2008
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Good job!!
Roses
from me
and you know who!
=^..^=
posted by
Whacky
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August 27, 2008
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Right on! An excellent attempt! MORE!!!! sam
posted by
sam444
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August 27, 2008
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"Let's Pretend" - what fun! I grew up on it and never quite got away from it completely.
posted by
TAPS.
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August 27, 2008
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It's quite good, Troosha...
loved that last line too..so perfect!
posted by
Sunnybeach7
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August 27, 2008
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Oh stop it, Bhaskar, you'll make me blush....
posted by
Troosha
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August 27, 2008
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But you are Troosh, so very good at it, just as you are good at everything, and your comment on my blog moved me with the love and honor you bestow on me. Must say, u a wonderful soul, and a very, very dear friend. My heart tips to your's
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
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August 27, 2008
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If looks could kill. Love your attempt. Your poem is excellent, and got me thinking.
posted by
yellowrose55
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August 27, 2008
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Splendid attempt indeed ...
posted by
afzal50
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August 27, 2008
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I thought you said you weren't very good at it...
This is excellent and got a definite smile from me
posted by
lionreign
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August 27, 2008
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I liked it!
You see something new in it with each read!
posted by
Corbin_Dallas
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August 27, 2008
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Superb departure from the norm my dear Troosha
reading between the lines triples its size! I loved this; many blessings and thanks
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mariaki
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August 27, 2008
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