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Beautiful Chaos
This poem felt almost chaotic and out of control, it was very powerful to me. What is also powerful is your mystical pictures you add of yourself to each of the poems; you are absolutely lovely.
posted by
freelance_ghost
on August 29, 2008 at 8:28 PM
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yes we are lucky if we always mean what we say...and evn luckier if we have the moral character to always say what we mean. Great poem Jen, as always.
posted by
Sinome
on August 24, 2008 at 4:23 PM
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... and what about ...
... the world that hides behind the words -
- genio
posted by
ggXpress
on August 24, 2008 at 12:46 PM
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this is brilliantly stated
posted by
Samantha39
on August 24, 2008 at 8:07 AM
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Words can do a lot of good or harm. Good stuff.
posted by
Sudanym_
on August 24, 2008 at 7:53 AM
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Well expressed
Nah, i didn't really mean it, just words. i joke i joke...
posted by
Sudanym_
on August 24, 2008 at 7:52 AM
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That's a really neat post, Purple_Mermaid.
posted by
TAPS.
on August 23, 2008 at 11:07 PM
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hey.......nice to see you again!!!!!!!!!!
posted by
Star5_
on August 23, 2008 at 9:07 PM
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