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Sinome...

...I have never encountered such an apt and poetic rendering of the nature and essence of love.
Every line here is a poem unto itself.
Well done!

posted by metalrat on August 23, 2008 at 1:00 PM | link to this | reply

Wonderful imagery my dear Sinome! I loved these lines of great truth: Great love leaves nothing to chance.
It opens wide all its doors that the breeze may enter from all directions So that the breeze may enter from all directions is magnificent! If more would embrace these lines I believe relationships would be much healthier for the duration! You are my favorite! Love you, sam

posted by sam444 on August 23, 2008 at 6:53 AM | link to this | reply

Beautiful

I can see that you are a person with intense feelings...somewhere, I have become numb inside. I want to read you more- maybe that will give me the much needed jolt.

posted by Shota on August 23, 2008 at 6:46 AM | link to this | reply

Ecstatic tribute to love. The ending is complete trust and acceptance, what will be will be!Superb!

posted by merkie on August 22, 2008 at 10:29 PM | link to this | reply

wow sinome!!!!!!

posted by 9STAR on August 22, 2008 at 6:48 PM | link to this | reply

fantastic passion. very dramatic

posted by Luz_Briar on August 22, 2008 at 5:13 PM | link to this | reply

wow, wow, wow my sinome..............

posted by 9STAR on August 22, 2008 at 3:52 PM | link to this | reply

Soulfully romantic!

posted by katray4 on August 22, 2008 at 12:16 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome

As Mariaki said… “a work of art”, though I wasn’t sure if you/the protagonist in the poem was speaking of a longing for such unbridled love or expressing regret for having not yet found it.  Love without boundaries – it’s the only way to love yet we are inherently fearful of letting our walls down, aren’t we?  When we will we ever abide by the expression life is too short.

posted by Troosha on August 22, 2008 at 8:09 AM | link to this | reply

posted by afzal50 on August 22, 2008 at 6:41 AM | link to this | reply

A work of art my dear Sinome

full of sincerity in its emotional imagery; excellent work my friend; many blessings and thanks - have a superb weekend

posted by mariaki on August 22, 2008 at 3:36 AM | link to this | reply

Fantastic...

posted by teddypoet_ on August 21, 2008 at 10:28 PM | link to this | reply

Call me strange but I like the raw heat part

posted by lustorlove on August 21, 2008 at 10:19 PM | link to this | reply

Yes...the living dream

The complete union...all of those things...very beautiful

posted by Sunnybeach7 on August 21, 2008 at 9:57 PM | link to this | reply

posted by __Purple_Mermaid11__ on August 21, 2008 at 9:43 PM | link to this | reply

The profundity of love is such that it is death-defying. Wonderful profound words from my far distant ocean kissed princess.

posted by Bhaskar.ing on August 21, 2008 at 9:27 PM | link to this | reply

wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

That feeling of completeness  I would only get from you.
whenever you come to me,
for I know that whatever will be,
will be.

posted by 9STAR on August 21, 2008 at 9:10 PM | link to this | reply