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Thoughts before

  
    A dream and in it?  I like.

posted by Whacky on August 21, 2008 at 8:17 PM | link to this | reply

Very nice!

posted by teddypoet_ on August 21, 2008 at 10:00 AM | link to this | reply

I must come to you again. A great poem needs another, and another read.

posted by Bhaskar.ing on August 21, 2008 at 9:55 AM | link to this | reply

Dear Marta

No wonder, I so adore my lovely poetess, the princess of the Ocean-Kissed Sands  from your Desert Prince

posted by Bhaskar.ing on August 21, 2008 at 9:53 AM | link to this | reply

Great work! Hi!

posted by Soul_Builder101 on August 21, 2008 at 8:39 AM | link to this | reply

Fascinating rich and appetizing. I will come to read it again!

posted by merkie on August 21, 2008 at 8:05 AM | link to this | reply

Enchanting

It was like I had a small film reel going behind my eyes.  Just wonderful!

posted by lionreign on August 21, 2008 at 6:53 AM | link to this | reply

And sorry for misspelling you name...

posted by Nautikos on August 21, 2008 at 6:18 AM | link to this | reply

Simone

A poem for a warm and languid summer evening...

posted by Nautikos on August 21, 2008 at 6:16 AM | link to this | reply

Picturesque indeed ..

posted by afzal50 on August 21, 2008 at 5:50 AM | link to this | reply

Sinome

the imagery in this poem was so vivid it was almost like reading a painting! Awesome my friend; many blessings and thanks

posted by mariaki on August 21, 2008 at 3:59 AM | link to this | reply

Sinome...you write so beautifully, with such vivid imagery!

Lovely!

posted by Sunnybeach7 on August 20, 2008 at 8:15 PM | link to this | reply

Magnificent!

"the sound of Nature's rustling laughter"  I absolutely loved this line as a description of the sound of the leaves in the wind.  Just wonderful!!!

posted by sfcookingpoet on August 20, 2008 at 8:11 PM | link to this | reply

.....wow!!!!!!!!!!!! sinome speechless!

posted by 9STAR on August 20, 2008 at 6:21 PM | link to this | reply

Hello my darlin' Sinome! I loved this line and how true it is: A half thought poem emerging from some hidden place, 
moving through the darkness, looking for total birth;

Such a great poem. I am happy you rewrote so we could enjoy this awesome imagery once again! Love to you! xoxoxosam

posted by sam444 on August 20, 2008 at 6:04 PM | link to this | reply

sweetheart, it is very rare that I see such beauty in 'darkness'. Your heart truly shines in this are. Such serenity depicted in the milieu of darkness only one with the calmness of heart can display. It makes me proud to have known such person in you my dear friend. (i sent an email for you dear). This is another grand offering for nature's gift from the gift of your heart fine poetess. Excellent work.

posted by __Purple_Mermaid11__ on August 20, 2008 at 5:54 PM | link to this | reply

You're painting a beatiful and ...

... moving picture ... of tenderness that could be true if dreams could come true - a sincere and heartfelt breath of a veil from within - well done -  - genio

posted by ggXpress on August 20, 2008 at 3:58 PM | link to this | reply