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fire and brimstone-licious.
j/k. very dramatic and skilled
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Luz_Briar
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August 20, 2008
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Sam
One of these days we will all find out what is behind the curtain, sam.
posted by
johnmacnab
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August 20, 2008
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Overcoming the fear of the curtain. Amazing poem
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serendipity09
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August 20, 2008
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posted by
contagion_publishing
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August 20, 2008
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sam
hell on earth
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lustorlove
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August 20, 2008
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Personal experiences of pain ...
... with hell and inferno as sources are tough teaching ... necessary compared to stagnation in development ... but our imagination is a strong reflector of our faith and gives us what we ask for, whether we like it or not - a fascinating poem, Sam ... well done -
- genio
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ggXpress
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August 20, 2008
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Some interesting thoughts on reclamation
posted by
Straightforward
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August 20, 2008
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lost in my own oblivion...how cool is that...well done!
posted by
teddypoet_
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August 20, 2008
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The never ending battles to conquer the internal strife. Very comprehensive poem to impart a reaction in empathy . Pain is the teacher and fear to be conquered? !
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merkie
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August 20, 2008
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haunting words
& feelings 
posted by
pelagus
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August 20, 2008
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It is the unlearning that we keep coming back to learn until we wake up.
A journey of the soul indeed.
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skye08
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August 20, 2008
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Sam
... or raise the curtain of certainty. I felt this was kind of celebratory piece - your emancipation, of sorts. I felt a person second guessing themselves but ultimately emerging strong and with demons in check.
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Troosha
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August 20, 2008
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