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Absolutely
You are so right. There comes a point in life when you realize that happiness is what comes from within....you cannot wait for someone to come into your life and give it to you. I love the part about planting your garden to decorate your soul. Beautiful....
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Shota
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August 23, 2008
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That really resonates with me... insightful thoughts captured beautifully
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resurrectionman
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August 22, 2008
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A strong poem and ...
... your repeatedly word 'learn' carries our source of development and possibilities as the core ... but, many times, it's more than hard. I fully agree when focusing on 'learning' -
- genio
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ggXpress
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August 20, 2008
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A solid sagacious song singing with reason. Hear ,hear! You are so strong and share so much !
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merkie
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August 20, 2008
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Excellently done - Your poetry is superb, Sinome!
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katray4
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August 20, 2008
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ONCE again a beautiful poem, yes, after a while we do learn.......the learning process never ends in one's life.
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shamasehar
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August 20, 2008
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thank you for lifting up my day
A real treat! Keep up the good work!
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ALocke
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August 20, 2008
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Inspiring and uplifting my dear Sinome
and so very well presented; excellent phrasing and a strong message; many blessings and thanks
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mariaki
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August 20, 2008
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We come to learn things often very late !!
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afzal50
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August 20, 2008
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Wonderful
touching and uplifting at once - I adore this
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lionreign
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August 20, 2008
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I found "After a while" so beautifully written, and I, like many others I am sure can relate. But do we ever learn really? And does the hurt ever leave us.
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GALACTUS_
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August 19, 2008
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That is so good, Sinome. Wonderfully written. I have learned from your poem.
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TAPS.
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August 19, 2008
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a lot in life to learn
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lustorlove
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August 19, 2008
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My darlin' Sinome, this was as profound as any of your work I have read! The cadence was perfect and the refrain of after awhile was brilliant. for I would hope I personally would catch on after awhile. there have been people in the past that I thought it would be impossible to go on after they were out of my life but surprisingly enough after awhile it does get better. I was very affect by the message! Such a brilliant poetess!~ i am always excited to open your blog because I know I am going to receive grand imagery, imagery that stays with me! That is great poetry for me! Love you, sam
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sam444
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August 19, 2008
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Very strong!
"After a while .../you learn the difference/between holding a hand and chaining a soul" - I have to wonder if my ex ever learned that. How many relationships have gone kaput for lacking this wisdom.
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WriterofLight
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August 19, 2008
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This poem is full of wisdom, and insight. Beautifully written. Wonderful images.
Joe 
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SFJoseph
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August 19, 2008
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Sinome
Very insightful!
posted by
Nautikos
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August 19, 2008
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this is very well-written and powerful
We DO learn!!!!
posted by
mejustme
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August 19, 2008
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it's a very inspirational poem, and yet realistic
i especially liked the part about how tomorrow's path is too uncertain for plans
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Luz_Briar
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August 19, 2008
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Who could say goodbye to you?
What a wonderful poem. I was imagining it as one of those poems that get read in the movies. Excellent!
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christis
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August 19, 2008
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Sinome
Although some days we would like to simply bask in the knowing, each day we learn something new about ourselves. Your poem refers to learning from the good-byes, but even while in the throws of a relationship we are maneuvering a constant learning curve. The person we say hello to at then end of each day varies, if only slightly, from the person we said hello to the day before. Self-nurturing is the best kind of nurturing as your poem so gracefully details.
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Troosha
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August 19, 2008
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an awesome adult perception of love and life, love! With TLC, BCA, "Top of the Stairs"
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BC-A
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August 19, 2008
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very true!
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9STAR
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August 19, 2008
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