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Hi Mindy. Beautifully written and structured. Very nicely done.
Joe 
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SFJoseph
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August 19, 2008
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Nice melancholy, love With TLC, BCA, "top of the stairs"
posted by
BC-A
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August 19, 2008
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Nite
There's a fine line between need and want and sometimes we're not sure if either one constitutes love... perhaps it's a bit of both. Strong, resounding piece!
posted by
Troosha
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August 19, 2008
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oh - and I am stealing it to share with a friend
I hope you don't mind
posted by
lionreign
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August 19, 2008
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ouch
That feels like I just got bitch-slapped with the most elegant gauntlet ever made.
That is beautiful
posted by
lionreign
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August 19, 2008
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So close to home. Having loved like this too often, I can attest to the
idea that, loving someone who totally loves you back is much healthier and better for you and your heart....that's what my 89 year old uncle kept telling me and he was right, of course.
posted by
benzinha
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August 19, 2008
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Most excellent AE!!!!! Love you! Shelly
posted by
sam444
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August 18, 2008
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Need weighs more on our heart than want. Nice work
posted by
serendipity09
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August 18, 2008
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p.s. .... you'll have to be quicker to outmaneuver the moon...LOL....Moon
posted by
magic_moon
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August 18, 2008
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This is very powerful, very moving. My Teacher says that Love is its own reward. In my experience, I have found that too be true; painful on a personal level but, true. The joy is in the loving. Moon
posted by
magic_moon
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August 18, 2008
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Excellent poem, kinda sad too . . . love the way it flows, goes out and comes back.
posted by
yellowrose55
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August 18, 2008
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Wonderful poem, So heartfelt... so true to what happens in reality. I am sorry Mindy, to need someone who does not belong to you is a sad thing, but hey it is what it is and life goes on right? there are many fish in that sea...and if you want to go fishing I am game, I'll come with you, Its about time I start getting what I need too :-) xoxo <<<<< Mindy>>>>
posted by
Sinome
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August 18, 2008
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oooooooohoooooooo
posted by
9STAR
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August 18, 2008
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