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Abslotutely great, although i don't know how lady like; hey, "it was good for me".
They don't have orgasm so i used that instead.
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froghead
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August 19, 2008
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Absolutely Marvolous, Sinome!
I want to be out there in it!
posted by
Sunnybeach7
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August 19, 2008
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An ultimate satisfaction ...
... splendid expressed with fireworks of words to picture Mother Nature's passionate show of natural forces - you manage very well to paint the intense cascade of feelings for the wonder of nature - and even with tenderness -
- genio
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ggXpress
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August 19, 2008
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This is truly amazing poetry. My mind is blank with shocked brilliance. You should be very proud of this one
posted by
serendipity09
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August 19, 2008
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WOW
Sinome this is absolutely superb! Such imagery and powerful visions; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
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August 19, 2008
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Sinome, I love a good storm. It's hard for me to go hide away just to be safe when I want to see everything going on, hear the wind, feel the force.
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TAPS.
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August 19, 2008
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posted by
teddypoet_
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August 18, 2008
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Orgasmic delight! Wonderful
posted by
Kayzzaman
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August 18, 2008
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The visions brought in your poem are an awesome sight.
Love this!
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yellowrose55
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August 18, 2008
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This is so wonderful! It was the calm before the storm, the desire to be in the storm, the sensuousness of a storm and this line:
and the rain will sensually caress the leaves
Oh, this enveloped and warmed my heart so! My poetess of fine imagery! I love your work so very much! It is a great balm for me!
I thought it was so cute that you wrote Shelly instead of sam. I didn't see till you said something. Now my darlin' Simone I must keep an eye on you! lol just teasing. But I do love you!!! xoxoxo
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sam444
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August 18, 2008
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bad girl me..
'orgasmic' got me...
LOL! you never cease to amaze me dear marta...i so love your fine touch in metaphoric spin. You are so inspiring dear...and this is captivating til the end.
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__Purple_Mermaid11__
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August 18, 2008
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