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but I think I prefer the re-write; although the difference is slight; great phrasing either way; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
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August 19, 2008
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I am with Solita... that sentence was a great asset to the poem. Great one Max!
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Sinome
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August 18, 2008
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I think the rewrite is oustanding! sam
posted by
sam444
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August 18, 2008
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Great rewrite!
great addition "Your perpetual self-pity session". Solita
posted by
mothernature
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August 18, 2008
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Strong expression and ...
... I felt the honesty in it - from my point it's to face the sad/bad/evil/hard etc. to let go into "it", 'cause from my knowledge and experience "it" will disappear by itself after a while. It's to dare to stay in it , knowing that it's all in my mind.
I believe in my own inner wisdom, that it "gives" me just so much I can take, before it stopps - then later ... I've to clean out more ... over and again ... a tough job - the worst job in life is to meet ourselves - take care - 
- genio
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ggXpress
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August 18, 2008
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