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posted by
9STAR
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August 18, 2008
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So exquisite:
Promising the dust of eternity. Right on AE. Love you, Shelly
posted by
sam444
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August 18, 2008
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5:36 PM
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Seems too short but then if the last line is great ok, but i don't know what "dust of eternity" means.
posted by
froghead
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August 18, 2008
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3:57 PM
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Wonderful!
posted by
katray4
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August 18, 2008
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12:32 PM
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Not only pretty to look at, but short and sweet and so true of one in love.
posted by
TAPS.
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August 18, 2008
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Nite
I'm with Bhaskar...
Promising the dust of eternity is a killer line!
posted by
Troosha
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August 18, 2008
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7:47 AM
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Beautiful words!
Short, and to the point.
posted by
Kolekshuns
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August 18, 2008
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7:40 AM
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Superb ...
posted by
afzal50
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August 18, 2008
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7:08 AM
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Perhaps we should swap places
You write the sweet romantic poems and I shall write poems of pain and darkness
This is beautiful
posted by
lionreign
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August 18, 2008
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4:56 AM
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Promising the dust of eternity" is a wowzer, NiteTide. Loved it
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
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August 18, 2008
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12:24 AM
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Sinome:
LOL, been more emotional than normal lately. Words keep popping into my head that my hand has to write down.
posted by
NiteTide
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August 17, 2008
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10:46 PM
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Marineair:
LOL, go ahead, it won't do any good.
posted by
NiteTide
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August 17, 2008
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10:45 PM
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Damn, girl...Do tell.

Maybe I should warn the guy off and tell him what a shrew you can be...
posted by
Marineair
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August 17, 2008
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10:43 PM
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Wow! Mindy??? Do I detect love is in the air??? This is absolutely beautiful...<<<sigh>>>
posted by
Sinome
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August 17, 2008
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10:40 PM
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