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posted by 9STAR on August 18, 2008 at 6:10 PM | link to this | reply

So exquisite: Promising the dust of eternity. Right on AE. Love you, Shelly

posted by sam444 on August 18, 2008 at 5:36 PM | link to this | reply

Seems too short but then if the last line is great ok, but i don't know what "dust of eternity" means.

posted by froghead on August 18, 2008 at 3:57 PM | link to this | reply

Wonderful!

posted by katray4 on August 18, 2008 at 12:32 PM | link to this | reply

Not only pretty to look at, but short and sweet and so true of one in love.

posted by TAPS. on August 18, 2008 at 9:10 AM | link to this | reply

Nite
I'm with Bhaskar...Promising the dust of eternity is a killer line! 

posted by Troosha on August 18, 2008 at 7:47 AM | link to this | reply

Beautiful words!
 Short, and to the point.

posted by Kolekshuns on August 18, 2008 at 7:40 AM | link to this | reply

Superb ...

posted by afzal50 on August 18, 2008 at 7:08 AM | link to this | reply

Perhaps we should swap places
You write the sweet romantic poems and I shall write poems of pain and darkness 

 

This is beautiful


posted by lionreign on August 18, 2008 at 4:56 AM | link to this | reply

Promising the dust of eternity" is a wowzer, NiteTide. Loved it

posted by Bhaskar.ing on August 18, 2008 at 12:24 AM | link to this | reply

Sinome:
LOL, been more emotional than normal lately.  Words keep popping into my head that my hand has to write down. 

posted by NiteTide on August 17, 2008 at 10:46 PM | link to this | reply

Marineair:
LOL, go ahead, it won't do any good. 

posted by NiteTide on August 17, 2008 at 10:45 PM | link to this | reply

Damn, girl...Do tell. 

Maybe I should warn the guy off and tell him what a shrew you can be...

posted by Marineair on August 17, 2008 at 10:43 PM | link to this | reply

Wow!  Mindy??? Do I detect love is in the air??? This is absolutely beautiful...<<<sigh>>>

posted by Sinome on August 17, 2008 at 10:40 PM | link to this | reply

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