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Happy New Year. I won't be posting for a while but, I'll still be reading.

I like share Secret Admirer last poem on 4th page. Thank you.

posted by Mystereo on January 2, 2009 at 11:17 AM | link to this | reply

:D

the brothers Grimm were brilliant. i love their stories, and i'm enjoying your poetic retelling of this one. you're expert with this kind of poem

posted by Luz_Briar on August 19, 2008 at 7:26 PM | link to this | reply

Came back for a secon read and to print it... I plan to retell this story many many times G-d willing and imagine how proudly i would tell my little ones... I knew the poet that wrote it!... Thanks again its wonderful... we just need the final installment now... :-)

posted by Sinome on August 19, 2008 at 3:30 PM | link to this | reply

Very nice!

An excellent composition on every level. Well done!

posted by metalrat on August 17, 2008 at 5:38 PM | link to this | reply

Outstanding! A superb effort!  sam

posted by sam444 on August 17, 2008 at 4:20 PM | link to this | reply

Oh Joe, this was just magnificent!!!  I am LOVING this.  Keep goooooooing!!!!!!! 

posted by NiteTide on August 17, 2008 at 12:13 AM | link to this | reply

This is beautiful Joseph...its so endearing that you are doing this,  you are a sweet man :-) Now hurry up and write the third installment.  I can't wait!!!

posted by Sinome on August 16, 2008 at 11:20 PM | link to this | reply