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This one line in conclusion stands as a message of infinite value to mankind. ...
"The human race has an uncanny ability to inflict its own
genuine pain under the auspices of the actions of others ".
Absolutely brilliant!
Kudos, my big sis on the TVS & 
from your admiring bro.
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Bhaskar.ing
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good night Sam!
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9STAR
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August 16, 2008
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In Conclusion.
Beautifully done, and full of wisdom. Very nicely done, as always.
Joe 
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SFJoseph
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August 16, 2008
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As always you whet the appetite and leave me craving more. This poem being a banquet of experience and ideas to digest and ponder we await dessert!
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merkie
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August 16, 2008
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What to say . . . your poem has so many great lines. "Hitching ones wagon on the star of
another only lends itself to heartache." and the line that followed. Love these. Wisdom
and heart shine in your poem of truth.
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yellowrose55
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August 16, 2008
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Jewels
This poem is full of gems. Each statement a wonder in itself.
posted by
sfcookingpoet
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August 16, 2008
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I loved this poem. I actually read every word
I hope you're having a wonderful weekend, Tator
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caspertoo
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August 16, 2008
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..most philosophical and much wisdom..moon
posted by
magic_moon
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August 16, 2008
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intelligence throughout, as usual, sam.
posted by
Luz_Briar
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August 16, 2008
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Sam
I drew from this that we can be our own worst enemy but as Taps said (which I thought was brilliant), each statement on its own could inspire or shape a poem.
posted by
Troosha
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August 16, 2008
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Sam, there is almost too much in this poem to think upon. I'll bet you could write a whole poem on each statement.
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TAPS.
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August 16, 2008
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i meant (the)
sorry it's the wine
posted by
lestate7
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August 16, 2008
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oh ya I love th poem you only drop diamonds ! LeStAte
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lestate7
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August 16, 2008
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we just starting super
the twilight is for the night and you are the
sun shinning a light for us to follow I love you! lets Go
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lestate7
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August 16, 2008
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if your in your twilight what am I in the midnight of my life, I liked this one but you lost me towards the end
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lustorlove
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August 16, 2008
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Sam...when I think I nave read your best you always surprise me with another masterpiece. This poem is enlightening... it so well describes your experience. You know what the secret of your poetry is? that it appeals to all levels of thinking. Like this beautiful effort. It could be interpreted as just a beautiful , enigmatic love poem ....or as a reflective account of self realization. Either way... Your words adapt to your readers interpretation and that is a gift not many possess. Great work my friend
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Sinome
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Introspective..to realize that the bright light was always within..
and all around us, and that we & others r a part & parcel of it, blinded only by our egos, is the self-realization that carries one safely to far greater heights..you, my wise poet friend, are further along that path of self-realization, keep holding on and exemplifying for others thru your writings..i'll be stopping by only infrequently as I've some travel coming up, best wishes blogit's Chief Mentor :)! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
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August 16, 2008
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Profound indeed !
posted by
afzal50
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August 16, 2008
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Deep and poignant, very well done, Shelly
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Kayzzaman
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August 16, 2008
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