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Bel

i'm glad my poetry touches you personally. there'll be more poems like this one, i promise!

posted by Luz_Briar on August 16, 2008 at 12:37 PM | link to this | reply

You write

with such intense emotions.  you never fail to stir my own emotions.

posted by Bel_ on August 16, 2008 at 12:13 PM | link to this | reply

Bhask, Purple, and Rumored

Thanks again for reading. I tried to spice things up by writing a sonnet in the midst of all the gloom-and-doom 

posted by Luz_Briar on August 16, 2008 at 11:36 AM | link to this | reply

Luz, it is beautiful, and much gentler than the other poems in this

collection.....

posted by Rumor on August 16, 2008 at 7:45 AM | link to this | reply

and it is very beautiful my dear....out pouring of heart. Awesome work.

posted by __Purple_Mermaid11__ on August 16, 2008 at 1:24 AM | link to this | reply

Aw, loved it, loved the sonnet, loved the whole, simply loved it Luz.

posted by Bhaskar.ing on August 15, 2008 at 8:50 PM | link to this | reply

not as sarcastic as most of the poems in the 'Frigidity' collection. it was written about unrequited love/infatuation. and, yes, it follows the rules of the traditional sonnet. unless, i've been taught incorrectly, which is always possible

posted by Luz_Briar on August 15, 2008 at 12:20 PM | link to this | reply