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Mermaid
I don't read your blog, enough, and for that, I apologize. This was wonderful!
posted by
Marineair
on August 16, 2008 at 3:56 AM
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Really liked the intro of the diary form repeated thru Tues and Wed.--then the poem, then the picure, and your "conclusion" (as part of the form) being more universal,while going into next poem.
I feel I'm experiencing multi-media at its cutting edge, and nothing like this has been done before in this way--as if you were working from the inside of change. Absolutely wonderful!!
John
posted by
jfm32
on August 13, 2008 at 4:13 PM
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Purple
Obsequious love or love with too many expectations can be suffocating….no one wants to be put on a pedestal.
posted by
Troosha
on August 13, 2008 at 10:17 AM
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"I love you" is more than words.......
You say so much with your words. You are truly blessed with great talent. Solita
posted by
mothernature
on August 13, 2008 at 10:11 AM
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To use prison and chains to ...
... cling doesn't work. You carve your words beautifully and with care - your sharp reflections embroidered in poetic terms makes me silent inside when I listen ... -
- genio
posted by
ggXpress
on August 13, 2008 at 9:53 AM
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Loving movement! 
BCA, "Top of the Stairs"
posted by
BC-A
on August 13, 2008 at 7:30 AM
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Here's a thought...
we usually expect others to conform to ourselves and our likings....and put up just so much resistance when others do it to us. Sigh.
posted by
midget34
on August 13, 2008 at 7:10 AM
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Purple
Ahhh - the lessons we learn about loving. It's sad when we learn them too late.
posted by
Hilow
on August 13, 2008 at 6:22 AM
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Yes my dear Jen
in our love for others we do tend to quash their indivisuality and don't always give them the space that is their right. Beautifully done my friend; many blessings and thanks always
posted by
mariaki
on August 13, 2008 at 6:04 AM
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You are so profound .
posted by
afzal50
on August 13, 2008 at 5:19 AM
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beautiful words, evoking much! good work!
posted by
Ariala
on August 13, 2008 at 4:53 AM
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Jen the Purple has a heart of gold. Very beautifully exp
pressed and it kind of evoked pathos.
to all you and yours from all of us here.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on August 12, 2008 at 10:21 PM
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Beautiful!
posted by
GoWithTheFlow_Journal
on August 12, 2008 at 9:18 PM
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heard that sugar pie
posted by
Smittenheimer
on August 12, 2008 at 8:04 PM
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how sad
posted by
Lanetay
on August 12, 2008 at 7:41 PM
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