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Afzal...
Thank you, my love!

posted by Afzal_Sunny7 on August 12, 2008 at 6:12 AM | link to this | reply

Ciel...
Interesting...yes!
Thank you for sharing... I know very little of the differences between poetry, prose..

posted by Afzal_Sunny7 on August 12, 2008 at 6:12 AM | link to this | reply

Captivating style indeed !

posted by afzal50 on August 12, 2008 at 1:09 AM | link to this | reply

Prose lays out a story through fairly set grammatical rules, where poetry indicates a story by suggestion, imagery and metaphor, and breaks whatever grammatical rules it wants to.

So--the first two parts were delicious dark poetry...  and the third reads like prose despite the line-breaks. 

It will be interesting to see where it goes next!

 

posted by Ciel on August 11, 2008 at 11:18 PM | link to this | reply