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Awsome! You have to go through something to get something.
posted by
Mystereo
on December 19, 2008 at 9:42 PM
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Very good, Joe
This was very impressive. I'd like one of those cloaks!
posted by
sfcookingpoet
on August 16, 2008 at 12:26 PM
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Hey Joe! Is everyhting okay? sam
posted by
sam444
on August 15, 2008 at 10:57 PM
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Freaking fantastic, Joe!!!
This was VERY well done. I read it again, and my only wish was that it was longer. I wanted that tattered cloak to give me more...
posted by
Marineair
on August 15, 2008 at 6:05 PM
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I love this one, the rhythm and flow is great
posted by
mejustme
on August 13, 2008 at 9:26 PM
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Hi! :-) came in for a second read... I just love this one Joseph... Great work!
posted by
Sinome
on August 13, 2008 at 8:43 PM
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Excellent! I was very touched by this entry! I love your poetry! The cadence and rhyme are so smooth! sam
posted by
sam444
on August 13, 2008 at 7:51 AM
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Thriving with real emotion and motion!
Perfect!
posted by
Katray2
on August 13, 2008 at 6:02 AM
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For me, this poem seethes worry and insecurity on many levels. But what fun would life be if we knew what would happen every step of the way?
posted by
NiteTide
on August 12, 2008 at 11:13 PM
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Seems that life is a situation of the blind leading the blind...
...so that we all fall into the proverbial pit. Nice, somewhat dark poem.
posted by
metalrat
on August 12, 2008 at 9:07 PM
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As always your poetry is hauntingly beautiful Joseph... It is such a pleasure to have the priviledge to read you.
posted by
Sinome
on August 12, 2008 at 8:52 PM
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singsong rhymes
charming! it all fits so well here, Jo!
posted by
Luz_Briar
on August 12, 2008 at 7:10 AM
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Beautiful Joe
"But who can steer without fear,
Absent the gift of sight."
posted by
_Dido_
on August 12, 2008 at 12:16 AM
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It is full of beautiful thoughts, very well done
posted by
Kayzzaman
on August 11, 2008 at 10:22 PM
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to be quiet I have been warned - yet - i am a theif who breaks all rules...
if anyone so much as tried to worship a single soul living on this earth that one is a fool. Only the one above all should be worshipped - place his image in your heart - clean your wellspring and feed it not with hate - sleep on a pristine pillow for a very short time - I pray to the one above all things - he is the to set one free - look to man and you will be sorely misabused dear one - I wont speak so long again but you and I have a history - I love you and Wigopa- Release with Love I pray
posted by
Smittenheimer
on August 11, 2008 at 9:44 PM
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eye opener...in excellent syntax dear sir...
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on August 11, 2008 at 9:29 PM
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Good thoughts Joe. The flicker of the candle wavers upon the way. I like the seer drawing nearer .....Without sight we are all blinded by incandescence.
posted by
merkie
on August 11, 2008 at 9:14 PM
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