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wow!...Mermaid, very powerful and sensual...

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posted by Rumored on August 12, 2008 at 4:55 PM | link to this | reply

Purple

So much passion -

posted by Hilow on August 12, 2008 at 2:29 PM | link to this | reply

A stirring and powerful ...

... poem ... uniting love and sexuality can burst beyond imagination - I belive that's a strong reason that the urge for giving in to love, with sex as a guide is one of the deepest needs in all of us. To completely surrender makes us vulnerable and might be scary but, the 'reward' can give the highest fruit -  - genio

posted by ggXpress on August 12, 2008 at 2:19 PM | link to this | reply

 Oh what a bravo feeling love! With TLC, "Top of the Stairs"

posted by BC-A on August 12, 2008 at 12:38 PM | link to this | reply

That was powerful and the last sentence made it much more so.  

posted by froghead on August 12, 2008 at 9:08 AM | link to this | reply

So sensual and beautiful  Amazing how much you can put into a few words and a little imagination

posted by Lotus_Flower on August 12, 2008 at 8:45 AM | link to this | reply

sensual. nice, in many ways

posted by Luz_Briar on August 12, 2008 at 6:40 AM | link to this | reply

Wonderful piece my dear Jen

so full of passion and longing; beautiful emotions; many blessings and thanks my friend; take care of you always

posted by mariaki on August 12, 2008 at 4:13 AM | link to this | reply

This was fantastic ans so sensual that I simply loved the force of it

Roaring over the sexuality of my nerves

Cascading fierce spasm

Powering my plea for sensual entry

Well done my Purple Jen

posted by Bhaskar.ing on August 11, 2008 at 11:57 PM | link to this | reply

 sips

posted by Smittenheimer on August 11, 2008 at 9:50 PM | link to this | reply

So very sensual, Jen...

Nice work!

posted by Sunnybeach7 on August 11, 2008 at 9:27 PM | link to this | reply

enjoyed

posted by Samantha39 on August 11, 2008 at 7:45 PM | link to this | reply

must of been some words spoken

posted by lustorlove on August 11, 2008 at 7:33 PM | link to this | reply

posted by mejustme on August 11, 2008 at 6:58 PM | link to this | reply