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Your creativity went far and beyound then you settled and sweetly charmed!
Great wrtie you really can write easy to follow and get your points across.
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Mystereo
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March 1, 2009
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...continuing my read. Love these off-beat, reversed perceptions. (Been a while since I was a peach...thanx for reminding me). What I especially liked was these very motions everyone does at the fruit stand (as if being there watching the buyer). The reversed perception makes the commonplace a dramatic action built thru waiting/suspense, while peach is having a universal experience we all can relate to. Wonderful setup, timing, release and double enterdre. The last line I feel off my chair!
posted by
jfm32
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November 18, 2008
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Very good imagery and flow. Vivid descriptions.
posted by
merkie
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October 4, 2008
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hmmnnn...some 'kodak moment' in my thoughts....lovely dear...
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__Purple_Mermaid11__
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August 12, 2008
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9STAR
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August 10, 2008
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