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Very poignant. But there are so many poems written to their lovers, I start wondering about my own universaltiy, so what's this poem got to do with me? Got lost in last 2 lines. Hey, all I need is 3 lines.

posted by jfm32 on August 9, 2008 at 5:11 PM | link to this | reply

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Hi Deborah.  And you said that you only wrote funny poems! This poem was wonderful.  Poignant and beautifully expressed.  You are really quite the writer, and a wonderful addition to Blogit. 

Joe

posted by SFJoseph on August 8, 2008 at 8:14 PM | link to this | reply

excellent poetic works! beautifully expressed dear...

posted by __Purple_Mermaid11__ on August 8, 2008 at 12:48 AM | link to this | reply

Very well conceived

posted by Kayzzaman on August 7, 2008 at 10:44 PM | link to this | reply

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