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Very poignant. But there are so many poems written to their lovers, I start wondering about my own universaltiy, so what's this poem got to do with me? Got lost in last 2 lines. Hey, all I need is 3 lines.
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jfm32
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August 9, 2008
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Hi Deborah. And you said that you only wrote funny poems! This poem was wonderful. Poignant and beautifully expressed. You are really quite the writer, and a wonderful addition to Blogit.
Joe 
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SFJoseph
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August 8, 2008
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excellent poetic works! beautifully expressed dear...



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__Purple_Mermaid11__
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August 8, 2008
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Very well conceived
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Kayzzaman
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August 7, 2008
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