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Now you are really, you need a doc or a love doc, Awsome
posted by
Mystereo
on December 19, 2008 at 9:46 PM
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i sip now love
posted by
Smittenheimer
on August 11, 2008 at 12:22 AM
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hahahaha, this was sooooo adorably cute. I enjoyed this tremendously and I actually could hear the country in it as I read it.
posted by
NiteTide
on August 10, 2008 at 1:13 AM
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Re: Cheugon
Hmmm??
I was also trying to imagine what it would sound like coming from Garth Brooks...
posted by
metalrat
on August 8, 2008 at 8:46 PM
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Cheugon
Thanks for the kind words. I am glad that you enjoyed the song. It is better when it is sung. Tim McGraw would be a good choice, though I am open to suggestions.
Joe 
posted by
SFJoseph
on August 8, 2008 at 8:18 PM
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Very nice!
Was it written with a particular singer in mind?
I can imagine those words being sung by Tim McGraw or Johnny Paycheck.
posted by
metalrat
on August 8, 2008 at 5:42 PM
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Fancy lovin' country mate! You write pure love. 
With TLC, BCA, "Top of the Stairs"
posted by
BC-A
on August 8, 2008 at 6:52 AM
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Very cool and sound...
posted by
Kayzzaman
on August 7, 2008 at 10:33 PM
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Excellent!
Joe, This was very funny. I can just see you in your greasy apron when a big-haired broad came a strollin' in.
posted by
sfcookingpoet
on August 7, 2008 at 9:52 PM
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That's good! I like it!
Red roses
from me and you know who!
=^..^=
posted by
Whacky
on August 7, 2008 at 8:15 PM
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Super cute song!!! I did not know you could write lyrics too... This poem is just great on its own but with the chorus makes a terrific song :-) you are so multi-talented my friend, Bravo!!!
posted by
Sinome
on August 7, 2008 at 7:43 PM
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