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Now you are really, you need a doc or a love doc, Awsome

posted by Mystereo on December 19, 2008 at 9:46 PM | link to this | reply

i sip now love

posted by Smittenheimer on August 11, 2008 at 12:22 AM | link to this | reply

hahahaha, this was sooooo adorably cute.  I enjoyed this tremendously and I actually could hear the country in it as I read it. 

posted by NiteTide on August 10, 2008 at 1:13 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Cheugon

Hmmm??
I was also trying to imagine what it would sound like coming from Garth Brooks...

posted by metalrat on August 8, 2008 at 8:46 PM | link to this | reply

Cheugon

Thanks for the kind words.  I am glad that you enjoyed the song.  It is better when it is sung.  Tim McGraw would be a good choice, though I am open to suggestions. 

Joe

posted by SFJoseph on August 8, 2008 at 8:18 PM | link to this | reply

Very nice!

Was it written with a particular singer in mind?
I can imagine those words being sung by Tim McGraw or Johnny Paycheck.

posted by metalrat on August 8, 2008 at 5:42 PM | link to this | reply

Fancy lovin' country mate! You write pure love.  With TLC, BCA, "Top of the Stairs"

posted by BC-A on August 8, 2008 at 6:52 AM | link to this | reply

Very cool and sound...

posted by Kayzzaman on August 7, 2008 at 10:33 PM | link to this | reply

Excellent!

Joe, This was very funny.  I can just see you in your greasy apron when a big-haired broad came a strollin' in. 

posted by sfcookingpoet on August 7, 2008 at 9:52 PM | link to this | reply

That's good! I like it!

Red roses from me and you know who!
=^..^=

posted by Whacky on August 7, 2008 at 8:15 PM | link to this | reply

Super cute song!!!  I did not know you could write lyrics too... This poem is just great on its own but with the chorus makes a terrific song :-)  you are so multi-talented my friend, Bravo!!!

posted by Sinome on August 7, 2008 at 7:43 PM | link to this | reply