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lovely rhyme....
put it on a poster and sell it!
posted by
FineYoungSinger
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August 8, 2008
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Powerful and motivating, Dear Troosha!
posted by
katray4
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August 8, 2008
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Absolutely brilliant, Troosha
The one line that stands out for me is "forgive your sins". So right you are, and the ending is superb. What a poetess you are! Amazing!!
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Bhaskar.ing
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August 8, 2008
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Troosha...........
You must know I absolutely adored this one! Perfect in every way - words of your inimitable style in the form of poetical wisdom! Excellent my dear friend; thank you and God bless; have a superb weekend
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mariaki
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August 8, 2008
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Beautiful and so natural in thoughts and spirit .
posted by
afzal50
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August 7, 2008
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Excellent poem, it has it all... powerful message and good advice. Turning stones over is how we find our gold. Great poem Troosha!!!! Bravo!!
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Sinome
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August 7, 2008
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The last stone I turned over had something icky under it. So I'll skip that
Red roses
from me and you know who!
=^..^=
I think Victor has run away from home, don't you?
posted by
Whacky
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August 7, 2008
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Amen! Sterling is written all over this one! Bravo! sam
posted by
sam444
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August 7, 2008
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You hit the nail on the head, there, Troosha. It's good to be flexible and adventurous.
posted by
TAPS.
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August 7, 2008
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dare yourself
good to be reminded of one's own power over life
posted by
Luz_Briar
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August 7, 2008
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How great it would be.. to live every bit of our life
with carefree abandon...throwing caution to the wind. Beautiful piece, Troosha!
posted by
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August 7, 2008
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Simplicity.....
It was just simple and straight to the point. But the core of the message is not simple at all. Thanks for sharing. Sophie.
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August 7, 2008
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Troosha....this sent shivers up my spine. Truly. I felt all the world of potential in the palm of my hands when I got to the end.......powerful.
posted by
NiteTide
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August 7, 2008
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and that just about says all that needs to be said. So wonderful
posted by
Kabu
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August 7, 2008
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Troosha
I loved that my friend, and we sure will not leave any stone unturned
posted by
WileyJohn
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August 7, 2008
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What magnificence!! What a great mind!!
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EX_TURPI
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August 7, 2008
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