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Wow, Pat_B, I'll have to read that one again.

posted by TAPS. on August 9, 2008 at 9:11 AM | link to this | reply

Pat

Very, very powerful! Night thoughts, that I need to shake off because it's morning...

posted by Nautikos on August 8, 2008 at 6:14 AM | link to this | reply

Pat B, I am in awe

And as I am feeling a abandoned today, which will pass (I hope), this hit me.

posted by Azur on August 7, 2008 at 5:38 PM | link to this | reply

Whoa.....I don't know if I should be mad at him or root him on............I'll do both.  LOL.

posted by NiteTide on August 7, 2008 at 11:15 AM | link to this | reply

your writing humbles me, you are so good at this Brilliant.

posted by Kabu on August 7, 2008 at 10:18 AM | link to this | reply

PatB

A lot of description went into that, well done. I remember nights like that of walking the streets drunk many years ago. I love this line especially;

"....leaving the window open when the heat’s on, we don’t have a contract to warm the birds."

I'll use that. LOL

posted by WileyJohn on August 7, 2008 at 8:01 AM | link to this | reply