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dAMn. thats Nice!
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lestate7
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August 7, 2008
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Contagion
I think your pain is better expressed in the re-write.
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Troosha
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August 7, 2008
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In this sensitive work we receive your emotions. With TLC, BCA, “Top of the Stairs”
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BC-A
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August 7, 2008
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Both are excellent!
superb phrasing; thanks for sharing & take care
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mariaki
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August 7, 2008
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Yes I agree with Sam...the revision is just great! Loved it!!!
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Sinome
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August 6, 2008
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I adore the revision! sam
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sam444
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August 6, 2008
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