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Marineair, I am thoroughly enjoying this and looking forward to what you
have coming for us......

posted by Rumor on August 8, 2008 at 5:22 PM | link to this | reply

Hi again, I wrote the 'writer' but ...
... ment of course: the 'reader' - sorry - yes, the poem is good action -  - genio

posted by ggXpress on August 8, 2008 at 2:29 PM | link to this | reply

Very narrative ...
... you manage to draw the writer into the action - good writing -

posted by ggXpress on August 8, 2008 at 2:26 PM | link to this | reply

Wow!  this was a great read, can't wait for what you say its coming!  Congratulations on the new Baby!!!  How did you manage to write all that with a new born in the house?  You are amazing!  TAke care of yourself and your new treassure. 

posted by Sinome on August 7, 2008 at 8:36 PM | link to this | reply

Intense
I was holding my breathe

posted by Lotus_Flower on August 6, 2008 at 10:38 PM | link to this | reply