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How beautifully true!

posted by NiteTide on August 7, 2008 at 10:54 AM | link to this | reply

Beautiful.

posted by teddypoet_ on August 6, 2008 at 12:31 AM | link to this | reply

Troosha, Is that why I can't sleep and sit here at 2:30 a.m. blogging? 

posted by TAPS. on August 6, 2008 at 12:28 AM | link to this | reply

Troosha

That sometimes we need to be to the point is beautifully brought home in your poem, and yet it is short and sweet

posted by Bhaskar.ing on August 5, 2008 at 10:37 PM | link to this | reply

Hi Troosha

I face the truth and the yuck of life all the time and so pure and so good do I sleep.  Lies are very hard to tolerate.  The ones that are the worst are the ones we tell ourselves.  How enlightened we could be!

posted by mysteria on August 5, 2008 at 9:57 PM | link to this | reply

Troosha

I really try and pray and meditate every morning so I don't live a lie. well expressed luv.

posted by WileyJohn on August 5, 2008 at 9:22 PM | link to this | reply

Short and sweet, and very well done. Well you are right, maybe not so sweet, but still very well done.

Joe

posted by SFJoseph on August 5, 2008 at 9:14 PM | link to this | reply

it conjures up images of people who pray, but don't believe in what they're even doing. great short message

posted by Luz_Briar on August 5, 2008 at 8:36 PM | link to this | reply

True , short and too the point. The poem not the nose!

A smile or two or more from me! =^. .^= Bo too!

posted by Whacky on August 5, 2008 at 8:22 PM | link to this | reply

how sad we are

posted by lustorlove on August 5, 2008 at 5:23 PM | link to this | reply

I love short and sensible.

Easy read and flowing,  like music to the ears.  Straight to the point.  loved it.  Sophie

posted by safriyie on August 5, 2008 at 3:28 PM | link to this | reply

So terse, so true! I love thisquatrain!  sam

posted by sam444 on August 5, 2008 at 1:37 PM | link to this | reply

Scratching the nose

is the greatest tell of the liar.

posted by FineYoungSinger on August 5, 2008 at 1:05 PM | link to this | reply

I'm hoping God knows how to sift through the sands of our minds

You are a darling. Thanks for what you left at my post!

posted by Kabu on August 5, 2008 at 11:43 AM | link to this | reply

~Peace, OTA

posted by OTA. on August 5, 2008 at 10:42 AM | link to this | reply

Or maybe He's just testing your patience & maturity before...

granting your prayers..hahaha! - Ash

posted by ash_pradhan on August 5, 2008 at 10:39 AM | link to this | reply

and then it's time to run back to Him...

posted by gold_dust on August 5, 2008 at 9:58 AM | link to this | reply

Naut

Some of it... most of it...  a piece of my truth....

posted by Troosha on August 5, 2008 at 9:29 AM | link to this | reply

Is that the truth?

posted by Nautikos on August 5, 2008 at 9:10 AM | link to this | reply

I like this

brief and to the point... a very well delivered point.  Good piece Troosha

posted by lionreign on August 5, 2008 at 7:49 AM | link to this | reply

Troosha not so sweet maybe

but truth will out! Cool piece for my last read of the day sweetie; thank you and God bless

posted by mariaki on August 5, 2008 at 7:30 AM | link to this | reply