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Re: the best of today, you lifted me to heaven with the touch of truth, you
Thankyou, I write this poem based on my experience, I've worked hard out from my fear, and by the grace of God my personality has been improving now. I am happy knowing someone is touching by this poem.
posted by
lyknliken
on August 3, 2008 at 1:38 AM
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Re: Nice thoughts
Thankyou for your comment, I will try to make it perfect
posted by
lyknliken
on August 3, 2008 at 1:32 AM
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Re: fear, the 2nd enemy
Aha, fear is better than afraid of :) there will be a 3rd enemy poem, I have 3 enemy in my life
posted by
lyknliken
on August 3, 2008 at 1:30 AM
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Re: Re: Re: Great and uplifting
I am joining this blog for socialize life and improve my english as well, I really thankyou for all of you who care my poem and especially my english grammar, I will keep writing and try to advance it as much as possible. God Bless You
posted by
lyknliken
on August 3, 2008 at 1:28 AM
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Right on! These words of poetry are Grand! Written with Great Heart
LyknLiken. Fear Not!
posted by
yellowrose55
on August 2, 2008 at 9:23 PM
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fear, the 2nd enemy
conquered in the poem with bravery. will there be a 3rd enemy poem?
posted by
Luz_Briar
on August 2, 2008 at 4:53 PM
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Re: Re: Great and uplifting
English is a very hard language to learn and I am an American and there is a lot for me to learn still even in my advanced years, they were trying to help but dont let it get you down, it comes with a lot of hard work.
posted by
Lanetay
on August 2, 2008 at 8:25 AM
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for me changes are hard to accept, I hide in my comfort zone
posted by
Lanetay
on August 2, 2008 at 8:22 AM
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the best of today, you lifted me to heaven with the touch of truth, you are
so great in words, I lost here for the moments.....
posted by
Star5_
on August 2, 2008 at 8:01 AM
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Nice thoughts
Not perfect grammar though.
posted by
Sudanym_
on August 2, 2008 at 6:51 AM
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Outside the box your readers progress with your emotions. Excellent! With TLC, BCA, “Top of the Stairs”
posted by
BC-A
on August 2, 2008 at 5:11 AM
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This is beautiful
posted by
Kayzzaman
on August 2, 2008 at 5:04 AM
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Re: Great and uplifting
Thankyou for remind me, I will keep learn to make better grammar
posted by
lyknliken
on August 2, 2008 at 1:48 AM
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Poignant ...
posted by
afzal50
on August 2, 2008 at 1:47 AM
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Great and uplifting
But I think that to make this a truely great poem you should take a look at the grammar.
I do not mean that in any dis-respectful manner. As English is not my mother-tongue either I just feel that I have to tell you.
Keep up the good work
posted by
Lotus_Flower
on August 2, 2008 at 12:14 AM
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Nice work
nice..
posted by
Trene
on August 2, 2008 at 12:04 AM
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