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if you've read this whole story. any constructive criticisms are welcomed! questions, too! of the two short stories i've posted on here, this is my lesser favorite though i think i came through in the end. it's definately still a work-in-progress...Thanks!
posted by
Luz_Briar
on August 15, 2008 at 1:22 PM
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Smitten
thank you for reading, and reading between the lines!
posted by
Luz_Briar
on August 3, 2008 at 12:45 PM
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A super fine production. Bravo
posted by
Smittenheimer
on August 3, 2008 at 11:16 AM
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Luz_Briar
I need to read from the begining I just dont seem to find the time, but the part of the blind gal made me think of some of my customers who are legally blind how sad
posted by
Lanetay
on July 31, 2008 at 7:40 PM
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This looks nice! I'll be back to read from the beginning.
posted by
myrrhage
on July 31, 2008 at 7:30 PM
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