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if you've read this whole story. any constructive criticisms are welcomed! questions, too! of the two short stories i've posted on here, this is my lesser favorite though i think i came through in the end. it's definately still a work-in-progress...Thanks!

posted by Luz_Briar on August 15, 2008 at 1:22 PM | link to this | reply

Smitten
thank you for reading, and reading between the lines!

posted by Luz_Briar on August 3, 2008 at 12:45 PM | link to this | reply

A super fine production.  Bravo 

posted by Smittenheimer on August 3, 2008 at 11:16 AM | link to this | reply

Luz_Briar
I need to read from the begining I just dont seem to find the time, but the part of the blind gal made me think of some of my customers who are legally blind how sad

posted by lustorlove on July 31, 2008 at 7:40 PM | link to this | reply

This looks nice!  I'll be back to read from the beginning.

posted by myrrhage on July 31, 2008 at 7:30 PM | link to this | reply

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