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Re: Luz, that was an excellent read...a good story touches the emotions,
thank you, Rumored. likewise for you, because your stories and humor are always delightful.
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Luz_Briar
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August 1, 2008
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Re: *applauds*
thank you, lionreign! you've been a great reader, and a great writer yourself.
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Luz_Briar
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August 1, 2008
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Luz, that was an excellent read...a good story touches the emotions,
and this one sure touched them all...
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Looking forward to whatever you share with us next..
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Rumor
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August 1, 2008
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*applauds*
That was beautifully done... I too will read again from the beginning - you have great vision as a storyteller
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lionreign
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August 1, 2008
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Re: Thanks, NiteTide
I can't wait!
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NiteTide
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July 31, 2008
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Thanks, NiteTide
there may be another Sarah story in the future. she's pretty much my answer to the greek soothsayer that was blind but blessed with wisdom. i doubt i can skip writing about her at least one more time.
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Luz_Briar
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July 31, 2008
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haha, thanks for that. But I can't get over the fact that Brul said "I love you
enough" implying that he's not completely in love with her (in my eyes). Oh well, I guess there's no helping it!
I wish this story would continue though......this was so fun!
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NiteTide
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July 31, 2008
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NiteTide
sorry it made you cry. but i must admit i'm honored that it moved you emotionally. as for Brul and Dustin, i think Dustin would be too frightened of Brul now after dying over all of this. and, i believe Brul really was in love with Sarah all along, but he had intimacy issues until he met Dustin, who is a character that could make anyone feel comfortable with themselves. i'm sure Brul and Dustin(or, ergh, Kat...???) will stay friends.
thanks for reading
posted by
Luz_Briar
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July 31, 2008
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BTW, if you couldn't tell, I LVOED these two stories you have posted. They tore at my emotions so well that I know these are stories I will come back to again.
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NiteTide
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July 31, 2008
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Re: You win some, you loose some
no, thank
you for reading!
and i'm honored you think it's great!
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Luz_Briar
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July 31, 2008
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my god....I don't know how to take this story because it just kills me. Was Brul really in love with her, or did he remain with her out of pity and sympathy? I question the passion that comes at the end because I feel that it's not real love that Brul is dealing with. What happens with Dustin and Brul's love then? Does Brul no longer love Dustin because he is a woman now? ...I'm in shock that Kat is gone/dead....and my heart is just crying as much as my eyes are. My god..........you've got me in such a state!
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NiteTide
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July 31, 2008
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my god....I don't know how to take this story because it just kills me. Was Brul really in love with her, or did he remain with her out of pity and sympathy? I question the passion that comes at the end because I feel that it's not real love that Brul is dealing with. What happens with Dustin and Brul's love then? Does Brul no longer love Dustin because he is a woman now? ...I'm in shock that Kat is gone/dead....and my heart is just crying as much as my eyes are. My god..........you've got me in such a state!
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NiteTide
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July 31, 2008
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You win some, you loose some
That was a truely great story - I will have to read it all over, from the very beginning. Thank you :)
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Lotus_Flower
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July 31, 2008
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