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Smittenheimer, right back atcha!

 

posted by shelly_b on July 30, 2008 at 4:21 PM | link to this | reply

Thanks everyone! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

posted by shelly_b on July 30, 2008 at 4:21 PM | link to this | reply

Great one....

perchance a tribute to Vickip?  Mal

posted by gapcohen on July 30, 2008 at 4:54 AM | link to this | reply

A stranger among existing friends

The picture compliments that sentence. A single pigeon amongst ducks and swans...

posted by Lotus_Flower on July 29, 2008 at 9:58 PM | link to this | reply

posted by Smittenheimer on July 29, 2008 at 9:52 PM | link to this | reply

loving heart that share's  receives love  return   
combine both sides in mind   bless you

posted by Smittenheimer on July 29, 2008 at 8:58 PM | link to this | reply

 ~ I dig it...  Write on!!! ~ Elyse

posted by elysianfields on July 29, 2008 at 8:42 PM | link to this | reply

Very nice

posted by lustorlove on July 29, 2008 at 5:44 PM | link to this | reply

TAPS, LOL, I hope not. I'm not a poet and I know it. haha

posted by shelly_b on July 29, 2008 at 5:29 PM | link to this | reply

Shelly, I scaled it way down. Are you at the library? lol

Still waiting for the ...damn comcast.

posted by Sunnybeach7 on July 29, 2008 at 5:25 PM | link to this | reply

it's still loading..

btw..

posted by shelly_b on July 29, 2008 at 5:23 PM | link to this | reply

Uh, Oh, shellyb.  You've been bit by the bug.  There'll be no stopping you now.  By the way, it was great.   Applauding here!

posted by TAPS. on July 29, 2008 at 5:23 PM | link to this | reply

Shelly....

Can you see it now? BTW...

posted by Sunnybeach7 on July 29, 2008 at 5:19 PM | link to this | reply

Jacenta, thank you!

posted by shelly_b on July 29, 2008 at 5:17 PM | link to this | reply

Sunny, LOL

posted by shelly_b on July 29, 2008 at 5:17 PM | link to this | reply

shelly_b

You did a good job, Shelly.  I even like the visual aid you used to accompany your poem. Beautiful picture.

posted by jacenta on July 29, 2008 at 5:13 PM | link to this | reply

Shelly

LMAO...it's his reaction to your poem

posted by Sunnybeach7 on July 29, 2008 at 5:10 PM | link to this | reply

lovelylady, glad you enjoyed it.

posted by shelly_b on July 29, 2008 at 5:08 PM | link to this | reply

Sunny, ROFL, it's the look on his face! hahahaha

posted by shelly_b on July 29, 2008 at 5:07 PM | link to this | reply

Hey, great work Shelly!  I really enjoyed it and I love the picture!...

posted by lovelyladymonk on July 29, 2008 at 5:04 PM | link to this | reply

Oh, and Sunny, thanks! (first comment)

ROFL

posted by shelly_b on July 29, 2008 at 5:02 PM | link to this | reply

Hahahahaha!

Shelly, I am cracking up!

posted by Sunnybeach7 on July 29, 2008 at 5:01 PM | link to this | reply

Moon, uh...because this is just a one time thing? LOL

posted by shelly_b on July 29, 2008 at 5:01 PM | link to this | reply

Sunny, HAHAHAHAHAHAHA...LMAO!

posted by shelly_b on July 29, 2008 at 5:00 PM | link to this | reply

posted by Sunnybeach7 on July 29, 2008 at 4:58 PM | link to this | reply

Congratulations!    Okay, why haven't you changed the category from Journal to Poetry? Moon

posted by magic_moon on July 29, 2008 at 4:56 PM | link to this | reply

AWWWWWWW.....

Friends are so precious ...great work, Shelly!

posted by Sunnybeach7 on July 29, 2008 at 4:50 PM | link to this | reply