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Re: Re: Elyse

BCA ~  ~ I do so love how you explained so much --- I am so wowed by your blog here; definitely a blog above  ~ What you do to expand the entertainment and with the tools you have here on BLOGit, amazes me!  I'm impressed that you knew of the KitKat jingle lineage.  --- and that you adhered to his suggestion.  I do think you have chosen great 'music' and background for your creative writings and short plays, productions here.  I love the music, please keep it coming.  and write on, please.  ~ (oy! the non-political Elyse making a non-political statement...shys away now...) Elyse

posted by elysianfields on July 29, 2008 at 6:34 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Re: Re: wigopa

Thank you so very much love! Excellent! With TLC, BCA, “Top of the Stairs”

posted by BC-A on July 29, 2008 at 12:40 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Fantastical work!..:)

Excellent love! With TLC, BCA, “Top of the Stairs”

posted by BC-A on July 29, 2008 at 12:38 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Re: wigopa

I am really enjoying the increased fantasy..in your works....It will be great to see it on the silver screen..

posted by wigopa on July 28, 2008 at 10:00 PM | link to this | reply

Fantastical work!..:)

posted by katray4 on July 28, 2008 at 8:28 PM | link to this | reply

Re: hey BC

Cool love, BCA, “Top of the Stairs” lol

posted by BC-A on July 28, 2008 at 8:25 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Very enjoyable

Thank you with the highest extreme appreciation and TLC, BCA, “Top of the Stairs”

posted by BC-A on July 28, 2008 at 8:21 PM | link to this | reply

hey BC

i skimmed just now, but i will definately try to read the whole thing tonight. interesting and unique, as always

posted by Luz_Briar on July 28, 2008 at 7:59 AM | link to this | reply

Very enjoyable

 Thanks for sharing such a wonderul blog.

posted by Kolekshuns on July 28, 2008 at 6:17 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Marshmallow Break

 Your keen perception encourages me. With TLC, BCA, “Top of the Stairs”

posted by BC-A on July 27, 2008 at 10:16 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Elyse

 I came to Blogit for the purpose of experimentation with genre. Television replaced Charles Dickens, Willa Cather, and Henry James the Harry Potter books notwithstanding . Those authors wrote total entertainment. Unfortunately my subscription plan allows me only to paste links. However they fit better, and readers can click on them at least. In this way I create multi-media short stories now. The story length must fit the throughline of the story. Indeed the story structure depends on it. My stories do especially because I try techniques from the Victorian very short story, contemporary flash fiction, and film. I changed the title of this story from Marshmallow Mates to Marshmallow Break, thinking of a young classmate last summer. His father wrote the Hershey's KitKat jingle, Give Me A Break  The son said that film soundtracks should stay thematic in type of music. I guess that he would approve of the songs in this story that category. They  fall within the easy listening or soft rock genres. In the stereo two speaker school of listening Percy Faith rocks in his type of music. In fact listeners of soft sounds radio stations in the 1960s treated pop instrumentals and jazz as rock. They shyed away from them. Thus in a similar way as Percy Faith's creative arrangements  as a film auteur and fiction author I rock love! In any event I find that different types of music help me tell my stories so far for myself. I find it a pleasure and feel glad about your return. Loves read Elyse's latest non-political comment on Obama the comments page of Read All Over right below on the last landing.

posted by BC-A on July 27, 2008 at 10:12 PM | link to this | reply

Re: sam

Cool! And read my reply to wigopa love. With TLC, BCA, “Top of the Stairs”

posted by BC-A on July 27, 2008 at 9:31 PM | link to this | reply

Re: wigopa

 At this time my screenplay fits the genre of fantasy/comedy/adventure. I increased the fantasy. The film differs from this earlier idea. I adapted it into a story for Blogit love. With TLC, BCA, “Top of the Stairs”

posted by BC-A on July 27, 2008 at 9:28 PM | link to this | reply

Re: EuphoricMoon

Cool. With TLC, BCA, “Top of the Stairs”

posted by BC-A on July 27, 2008 at 9:22 PM | link to this | reply

The ship names's "Top of the Seas" The blog name's "Top of the Stairs"

Brad takes out of his hand a black costume pirate eye patch. He rips open the plastic, and puts it on.

 “Ho ho ho and a bottle of rum love! One dead man on the Top of the Seas!”

Thank you loves for over 300 views so far with encouraging daily numbers. With TLC, BCA, "Top of the Stairs"

 

posted by BC-A on July 27, 2008 at 9:20 PM | link to this | reply

Marshmallow Break

I agree with my daughter Marion. (Wigopa).  You do know how to create a scene. Very interesting and well done.

Joe

posted by SFJoseph on July 27, 2008 at 6:16 PM | link to this | reply

I'm over stimulated --- ok rather, over inspired...this was so rich - I LOVE It.  I love the characters, the names - the music between scenes --- Mamma Mia and the Abba sound and Percy Faith, my goodness but you rock with your artistry ~ your creativity ... and I don't know if I agree with Brad --- I am probably so always looking for the 'real' in things that I just simply miss out on fun (often and to tell you the truth)  (the candy, 'nerd'(s) was my idea ) ~ ~Elyse

posted by elysianfields on July 27, 2008 at 5:26 PM | link to this | reply

The BlogitsLMAO, I couldn't help it! I live next door to the Bickersons, lmao. Your stories are the best. First read is mine I will be back! sam

posted by sam444 on July 27, 2008 at 3:49 PM | link to this | reply

You so know how to create a scene...This is just superb..Your style is just awesome!!!!!!!

posted by wigopa on July 27, 2008 at 2:00 PM | link to this | reply

Definitely. Life is not 'real' anyway. Moon

posted by magic_moon on July 27, 2008 at 7:25 AM | link to this | reply