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... and what comes from the heart doesn't often make it into the words we speak... Jen this is an amazing poem. You are such an artist my friend... I am humbled by the easy way your thoughts transform into words... Your writing is so liquid, so natural as if one were listening to someone speak from the heart. Thank you for this beautiful write.
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Sinome
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July 22, 2008
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Too often we say what we do not mean; and we know we do not mean it.
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EX_TURPI
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July 22, 2008
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So superbly written, mermaid
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Kayzzaman
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July 22, 2008
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volatile sincere writing! I loved it!
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Kobriel
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July 22, 2008
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wow, I think we can all say we've been there..done that..and regretted it
but it's surprising what a genuine "I'm sorry" can do..
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Rumor
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July 22, 2008
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A traumatic romantic read love. Terrific, lol, BCA, “Top of the Stairs”
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BC-A
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July 22, 2008
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Which is why we should think before we speak my dear Jen!
Superb piece; thank you and God bless
posted by
mariaki
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July 22, 2008
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So profound and wise expression !
posted by
afzal50
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July 22, 2008
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That last line is infinitely memorable!
Nice anatomy of a lovers' quarrel. :)
posted by
Pat_B
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July 22, 2008
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How very true! nicely written too!
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auslander
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July 21, 2008
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Very sad, Jen
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Sunnybeach7
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July 21, 2008
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