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wow - telling and humongous - we cry along side in rhythm -  seperated only by repeated left clicks and cookies

posted by Smittenheimer on July 27, 2008 at 9:25 AM | link to this | reply

ps. my song lyrics are usually more positive. i'm gonna try an' post more of them.

posted by froghead on July 23, 2008 at 7:35 AM | link to this | reply

Kingday-thank you

posted by froghead on July 23, 2008 at 7:19 AM | link to this | reply

Vickip
How can you know your "means" begore you dream? And if you do, it's not a dream. Plus, not my style, i write from my own experience. My life sucks so certainly some people think my (sorta) poetry sucks. Not me... Oh yea also, "all things are possible to he who believes".

posted by froghead on July 23, 2008 at 7:19 AM | link to this | reply

God shall come to you and you shall awaken to Him! Love is your life vest!
You shall float in Him, not to sink, see Him and truth and pain will ease!

posted by kingclay on July 22, 2008 at 7:09 PM | link to this | reply

Fate steals your dreams ... hmmmm, or, dream more within our means?
(That will go over like a lead balloon) haha. 

posted by Departed1 on July 22, 2008 at 4:24 PM | link to this | reply

The twists are ingenious.

posted by EX_TURPI on July 22, 2008 at 3:38 PM | link to this | reply

  

posted by RomaKay on July 21, 2008 at 8:16 PM | link to this | reply

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