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Jen ...this poem was so worth coming back for, actually all the poems I have read this afternoon so far are magnificent... I am in awe of all and specially of you my sweet mermaid for I know you dwell in pain and your courage inspires me so.
" The sordid sepia lurks before my eyes, certain that even from a distant mile they will prop my heart, as they have, in the darkest hue of my past"... that is so amazinly well expressed, so beautifully written. Take care of you darlin' I will speak with you soon.
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Sinome
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July 21, 2008
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Compelling poem, Mermaid...
...with an excellent moral at the end. Well done!
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metalrat
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July 21, 2008
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I love what i read from you. such heart and genius with words
posted by
Jeffepic
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July 21, 2008
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Still lovely, though sad, Jen!
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Sunnybeach7
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July 21, 2008
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Purple
Sometimes it's best not to look back... nicely done!
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Troosha
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July 21, 2008
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great work my dear blogit friend. Be careful reposting they suspended my use on blogit for reposting my works calling it spamming so be careful there is a rat here on blogit.
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spinner
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July 21, 2008
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There is such raw emotion here...Just open and waiting to be felt..WOW!
posted by
Wigopa_
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July 20, 2008
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Such beauty but with so much pain. Lovely.
posted by
NiteTide
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July 20, 2008
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Yes, it's very true !
posted by
afzal50
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July 20, 2008
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So sad, Jen...
Better times ahead, I hope
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Sunnybeach7
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July 20, 2008
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Fantastic read, Mermaid!
I love the line, "They fall in line waylaying for renaissance..." So well put.
- Chris
posted by
Marineair
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July 20, 2008
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seems like a day to reflect on the past
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lustorlove
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July 20, 2008
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