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Marineair
This is blazing like a 50 cal from a half mile away
and your aim is right on target my friend. Have a great day
posted by
Smittenheimer
on July 21, 2008 at 4:15 PM
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Marineair
Remarkable work. There were so many fabulous line that jumped out at me but this one (for whatever reason) lingers with me:
You've blackened the stars, shrouded the skies
Silenced the innocents' woeful cries
posted by
Troosha
on July 21, 2008 at 8:03 AM
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spectacular! It's in a moment like this that you finally see......great!
posted by
shamasehar
on July 21, 2008 at 6:10 AM
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wow - sensational writing.
posted by
Trene
on July 21, 2008 at 4:24 AM
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This poem is crammed full of wicked imagery, cunning words and overall, a spectacular talent for causing me to shiver in admiration... well done!!
posted by
DeeJay101
on July 21, 2008 at 2:37 AM
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The speculum shatters, its frame ablaze
Your chosen path now through a circle of fire
Trodden by each one of a million liars...
These last three lines have left me on the edge of my seat yet again....
posted by
Wigopa_
on July 21, 2008 at 12:02 AM
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These poems are intense and take time for me to read. I haven't had time today so I'll make sure read them tomorrow during a quiet moment.
posted by
NiteTide
on July 20, 2008 at 10:17 PM
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very well written
posted by
Lanetay
on July 20, 2008 at 9:58 PM
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Haven't read the earlier ones but should be reading them
posted by
Straightforward
on July 20, 2008 at 9:28 PM
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Endgame: The Burning Speculum
Another truly great entry in your Endgame saga. As I have said before, as I read these poems, I kept thinking about commenting on certain passages, but the great lines and thoughts just kept on coming. So I again am commenting on the whole poem. This is very well said. Very powerful. Each piece of the series is truly marvelous. When all of the pieces are together, this can be considered a true masterpiece.
Joe 
posted by
SFJoseph
on July 20, 2008 at 8:24 PM
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very nicely done..
posted by
Star5_
on July 20, 2008 at 8:11 PM
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posted by
contagion_publishing
on July 20, 2008 at 6:39 PM
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