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Luz, thank you for reading and for your feedback!
You're right--but he is telling the story some time later... Still, I will go back through his actual remarks and make sure it is appropriate to him.
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Ciel
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July 31, 2008
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pitch-perfect narration
though no 9 year old has a vocabulary so extensive, i could definately hear the voice of the narrator (an irish child). i hear the accent and everything! i wonder what's in store for this poor boy.
fantastic, Ciel!
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Luz_Briar
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July 31, 2008
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I step out of character
please forgive me as I say what I really felt after reading this. . ""Yeah Baby! your gettin' it good Now!"" and so what I meant by that strange exclamation is that your $hizzle is getting so very tight that it is literally on fire. Bravo and please, please Encore'. Thank you for everything
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Smittenheimer
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July 22, 2008
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