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lovely

great. beautiful, gothic descriptions in the vein of historical gothic writers. i'm really enjoying this story.

posted by Luz_Briar on July 23, 2008 at 5:19 PM | link to this | reply

and we

laughed so hard -> "I thought of that mythic dryad who begged the heavens for succor"

posted by Smittenheimer on July 22, 2008 at 4:56 PM | link to this | reply

a note or two to all readers

First, I am copying and pasting from Wordpad, and I don't know why it suddenly decides to indent.  It was not my intent to indent, so please ignore it.

There are a couple of Italian words here.  Palazzi is easy, the plural of palazzo or palace. Lazzi means clowns, or clownish actors.  Cunni is an extremely rude word which was widely used in Rome and after.  It means what you think it means, and it tells you something about our Columbina.

Once again, thanks very much for reading and for letting me know you were here, and if you like, what you think of the story, the characters, and all!

posted by Ciel on July 19, 2008 at 11:11 AM | link to this | reply