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posted by Rumor on July 20, 2008 at 12:54 PM | link to this | reply

You're probably right. I really should cut my passages in half. Thanks for the constructive critism, I really appreciate it!

posted by Luz_Briar on July 19, 2008 at 11:43 AM | link to this | reply

Good story; but I suggest you make each post a little shorter. You will attract more readers.

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