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Luz, you certainly got my attention.......
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posted by
Rumor
on July 20, 2008 at 12:54 PM
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Ex Tupri
You're probably right. I really should cut my passages in half. Thanks for the constructive critism, I really appreciate it!
posted by
Luz_Briar
on July 19, 2008 at 11:43 AM
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Good story; but I suggest you make each post a little shorter. You will attract more readers.
posted by
EX_TURPI
on July 19, 2008 at 10:46 AM
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