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Oh, that was beautifully well done...

Nice job!  - Chris

posted by Marineair on July 20, 2008 at 5:42 PM | link to this | reply

fantastic poem

The style of the poem so perfectly fits the subject.  I loved this

posted by lionreign on July 20, 2008 at 11:40 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Sam444

Hi Sam. I am so pleased that you enjoyed the poem, and came back for a second reading.  I am truly honored.  Thank you so much for your support.

Joe

posted by SFJoseph on July 19, 2008 at 7:04 PM | link to this | reply

Re: NiteTide

I am glad you found "Faerie" to be intriguing.  I liked your "romantic thoughts" about how the poem could be expanded.  A very good idea.  I may have to try that one day.  As always, thank you for visiting, and reading, and for the kind and helpful comments.

Joe

posted by SFJoseph on July 19, 2008 at 6:56 PM | link to this | reply

Hi Joe! This poem is so cool I just had to come back and read it again. Have a great evening!  sam

posted by sam444 on July 19, 2008 at 5:12 PM | link to this | reply

This is a fantastic poem. It gave a feel for an epyllion. You are masterful with quatrains as well. I enjoyed the rhyme scheme and it gave much impetus to the cadence! Right on! Bravo!  sam

posted by sam444 on July 19, 2008 at 8:25 AM | link to this | reply

Excellent .....thanks

posted by Shams-i-Heartsong on July 19, 2008 at 5:43 AM | link to this | reply

This was quite intriguing!!  I felt like the son should have fought for the throne though...LOL, my silly little romantical thoughts at play!  Excellent poem as usual!! 

posted by NiteTide on July 18, 2008 at 10:45 PM | link to this | reply

Marvellous

posted by Kayzzaman on July 18, 2008 at 10:16 PM | link to this | reply

fantastic rhyme scheme. as always, great subject choice, too.

posted by Luz_Briar on July 18, 2008 at 8:56 PM | link to this | reply