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Urban sprawl has to be controlled...

...or it will be our undoing.
Excellent poem with an important message.

posted by metalrat on July 19, 2008 at 2:42 PM | link to this | reply

"We've never applied all that we've learned..."

No we haven't..... That was one of the most tragic things I think I've ever read. I too am at a loss for words...

posted by Kobriel on July 19, 2008 at 10:03 AM | link to this | reply

I am lost for words

Chris you are a lyrical god of conflict poetry, the integrity of this is matched only by the power... I feel like you ran over my mind with a furied steamroller, etched in tragic beauty.

posted by lionreign on July 19, 2008 at 6:46 AM | link to this | reply

Wonderful visuals, impressive vocabulary.

posted by Gardner_3 on July 19, 2008 at 4:26 AM | link to this | reply

Very, very awesome!

 I love it!  It is the truth too.  totally Awesome.   

posted by Kolekshuns on July 18, 2008 at 9:55 PM | link to this | reply

I can't tell you

how much I enjoyed this!  i don't think i've read you before, so glad u left a comment, i'm terrible at keeping up on this.  "we mindlessly wait the death of the sun" and how we "haven't applied what we've already learned." such powerful phrases.  I never understood how the world doesn't devote all efforts to the environment and NASA, the two most important goals for our species.  Bravo. Here's a rose  from our world

posted by BigD81 on July 18, 2008 at 9:41 PM | link to this | reply

 Oh when will we ever learn mate.  Take care, BCA, “Top of the Stairs”

posted by BC-A on July 18, 2008 at 8:36 PM | link to this | reply

Re: NiteTide

Thank you, Mindy.  Kind of you to say so after 'lacerating' me so much on your own blog...;)

posted by Marineair on July 18, 2008 at 2:21 PM | link to this | reply

"lacerated silence".......a perfect ending.

posted by NiteTide on July 18, 2008 at 2:06 PM | link to this | reply