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My fascination deepens
I am enthralled... you better have the other 6 posted already, or I am going to be very put out
posted by
lionreign
on July 19, 2008 at 6:38 AM
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amazing! I am thrilled to continue
posted by
Kobriel
on July 18, 2008 at 5:37 AM
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No....I'll wait.
posted by
NiteTide
on July 17, 2008 at 5:22 PM
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Very nice for the same reasons as the last.
posted by
Sudanym_
on July 17, 2008 at 7:21 AM
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I am with my Dad "SFJoseph" on this one..I will see how it plays out myself..
posted by
Wigopa_
on July 16, 2008 at 11:53 PM
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SFJoseph
Joe, thank you for the kind words. I'll look forward to your response to the remainder of Endgame. - Chris
posted by
Marineair
on July 16, 2008 at 8:40 PM
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Endgame
A significant and powerful work. You raise many questions, and make one question himself. I can see that you have put your heart and soul into this work. Very well done. I will be back to see how the music plays out.
Joe 
posted by
SFJoseph
on July 16, 2008 at 8:37 PM
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hmmmmmm!
Very interesting!
posted by
Kolekshuns
on July 16, 2008 at 7:57 PM
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NiteTide
If you have a question, please don't hesitate to ask. That was another of my intents. If it's something that will spoil the experience or will be answered later, I'll let you know. Thank you! - Chris
P.S. - I've posted "The Ire of Air" in your comments section. 
posted by
Marineair
on July 16, 2008 at 7:02 PM
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Incredible....this was so over the top for me, I'm afraid I had to read it 5 times. LOL. I have several questions now burning through my mind, but I think they will be answered as each poem is revealed, so I will be patient and wait it out.
Thus far, my favorite line is: " Is the sand any different in your hourglass than it is in mine?"
This and the first have been incredible...I know I will have to read them all over again when all 8 are revealed, to get the real emotions threaded within these lines.
posted by
NiteTide
on July 16, 2008 at 6:54 PM
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