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My fascination deepens

I am enthralled... you better have the other 6 posted already, or I am going to be very put out

posted by lionreign on July 19, 2008 at 6:38 AM | link to this | reply

amazing! I am thrilled to continue

posted by Kobriel on July 18, 2008 at 5:37 AM | link to this | reply

No....I'll wait. 

posted by NiteTide on July 17, 2008 at 5:22 PM | link to this | reply

Very nice for the same reasons as the last.

posted by Sudanym_ on July 17, 2008 at 7:21 AM | link to this | reply

I am with my Dad "SFJoseph" on this one..I will see how it plays out myself..

posted by Wigopa_ on July 16, 2008 at 11:53 PM | link to this | reply

SFJoseph

Joe, thank you for the kind words.  I'll look forward to your response to the remainder of Endgame. - Chris

posted by Marineair on July 16, 2008 at 8:40 PM | link to this | reply

Endgame

A significant and powerful work.  You raise many questions, and make one question himself. I can see that you have put your heart and soul into this work.  Very well done.  I will be back to see how the music plays out. 

Joe

posted by SFJoseph on July 16, 2008 at 8:37 PM | link to this | reply

hmmmmmm!

 Very interesting!   

posted by Kolekshuns on July 16, 2008 at 7:57 PM | link to this | reply

NiteTide

If you have a question, please don't hesitate to ask.  That was another of my intents.  If it's something that will spoil the experience or will be answered later, I'll let you know.  Thank you! - Chris

P.S. - I've posted "The Ire of Air" in your comments section. 

posted by Marineair on July 16, 2008 at 7:02 PM | link to this | reply

Incredible....this was so over the top for me, I'm afraid I had to read it 5 times.  LOL.  I have several questions now burning through my mind, but I think they will be answered as each poem is revealed, so I will be patient and wait it out. 

Thus far, my favorite line is: " Is the sand any different in your hourglass than it is in mine?"

This and the first have been incredible...I know I will have to read them all over again when all 8 are revealed, to get the real emotions threaded within these lines.

posted by NiteTide on July 16, 2008 at 6:54 PM | link to this | reply