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Ex Turpi
the whole poem is a quote. i just wanted to remind readers that Indrid was speaking the words. that's all
posted by
Luz_Briar
on July 16, 2008 at 1:45 PM
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Re: Leaders Reminder
I want to thank you too
posted by
Smittenheimer
on July 16, 2008 at 11:31 AM
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Why was the last stanza in parentheses?
posted by
EX_TURPI
on July 16, 2008 at 10:44 AM
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Luz
Enjoyed your reference to chalk - hop it or smear it!!!! Great piece...
posted by
Troosha
on July 16, 2008 at 9:59 AM
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Leaders Reminder
Well done, 
, and thanks for visiting my site, and for the kind remarks.
Joe 
posted by
SFJoseph
on July 15, 2008 at 8:42 PM
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Well,
From what I read you create a good twosome relationship with emotion that includes his alienation ironically love. lol, BCA, “Top of the Stairs” 
posted by
BC-A
on July 15, 2008 at 7:09 PM
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