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posted by
DeeJay101
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July 15, 2008
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wow......
posted by
9STAR
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July 15, 2008
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This took me along for the ride with every syllable.... just a
wonderful and well written poem ... thank you!
posted by
VictoriaP
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July 15, 2008
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This is an excellent poem! If we could only learn to face each fear as it
invades us-ultimately there would only be one-with which we could cope! I love this poem! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
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July 15, 2008
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This is excellent my friend!
superbly written; great style; thanks for sharing and God bless (btw thanks for stopping by, much appreciated)
posted by
mariaki
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July 15, 2008
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Great poetry! You really put this together in a realistic way!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
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July 14, 2008
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You have got some crazy talent Mr. Chris. CRAZY. You blew me away with "
My past does not fade / As easily as does my sight" and then blew me away further with your final lines: "
There’s a fresh burial in this place / With all the fears I’ve failed to face." You're an enigma, to say the least, and a true poet, to say the most.
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NiteTide
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July 14, 2008
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