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No don't let the bad win, over come darling it can be done
well I try to anyway.
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July 14, 2008
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July 14, 2008
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posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
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July 15, 2008
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Life is full of such disappointments in people
and those of us who love and give them chances are called simple fools. But we are holy fools, instead, not valuing what the world values. We see, in its victories, defeats of the soul, and, in its defeats, love triumphant.
Carl Peter
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cpklapper
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July 14, 2008
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Purple
Your closing line(s) to your post usually bring your entire poem into focus for me - as was the case today. You definitely write with a great deal of passion....
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Troosha
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July 14, 2008
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Very well done Jen, as always
hope you are well; take care my friend and God bless always
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mariaki
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July 14, 2008
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so it goes ...
Excellent! Love. lol, BCA, “Top of the Stairs”
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BC-A
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July 14, 2008
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Great wordplay ~ imagery is powerful --- and with your typical 'wisdom' ~
Elyse ~~~ Write on Jen...
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elysianfields
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July 13, 2008
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Jen this is great... as always. I have missed reading you, sorry, but things were complicated, I intend to remedy that :-) I hope you are feeling OK. Take care of you .
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Sinome
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July 13, 2008
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posted by
RomaKay
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July 13, 2008
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Wow Jen... Excellent!
I see that NiteTide has already said that, and I hate to be repetitive of others, but I can't think of a more appropriate word.
Great work, as always! 
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Sunnybeach7
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July 13, 2008
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Excellent...as always!!!
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NiteTide
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July 13, 2008
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