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Your daughter shows tremendous depth for her age...

...and talent as a poet.
And leave it to Vicki to come up with the perfect picture for any occasion.

posted by metalrat on July 17, 2008 at 3:08 PM | link to this | reply

Awestruck and less confused

You are too kind - Is this not the most amazing poem (for an any year old) so very Very well done..

posted by Smittenheimer on July 17, 2008 at 2:15 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Smittenheimer

Actually my 10 year old daughter wrote this..Yes Vicki P found this for me and my daughter, where we then each write a work about it..Sorry for the confusion, glad you enjoyed my daughters work!

posted by Wigopa_ on July 16, 2008 at 10:43 PM | link to this | reply

? who did what now

totally engrossed and then confused (sorry) You wrote this poem, right?- It was beautiful and then I believe you mentioned that Vicki P arted it up for you.  If that's the case then this is a very nice collaboration.  Congrats to you both

posted by Smittenheimer on July 16, 2008 at 3:06 PM | link to this | reply

lovely poem and picture

posted by lyknliken on July 15, 2008 at 1:48 AM | link to this | reply

Thank you all sooo much!

I am so happy that you all enjoyed it..I thank you a great deal for taking the time to read her work..Much love to everyone here! You are just a awesome bunch of people!

posted by Wigopa_ on July 15, 2008 at 12:40 AM | link to this | reply

Cloudy Throne (in my granddaughter's words)

Wow.  Now we have three of us in the family all striving to obtain computer access. Seriously, my dear granddaughter that was a truly beautiful poem.  I am now, and always will be, very proud of you.  Write on.

Joe

posted by SFJoseph on July 14, 2008 at 9:10 PM | link to this | reply

Wow, such talent at such a young age...u r a family of poets...

hidden from the world so far like gems in a mine..keep creating & sharing my dear friend!- Ash :)

posted by ash_pradhan on July 14, 2008 at 8:17 PM | link to this | reply

10 years! That's some talent there!

posted by Soul_Builder101 on July 14, 2008 at 3:48 PM | link to this | reply

That's just Wonderful wigopa! I'm not surprised you are proud of her!!Chris

 a rose for each of you.Chris.

posted by Scramble on July 14, 2008 at 2:02 PM | link to this | reply

And so you should be my friend!

this is indeed a lovely write; thanks for sharing it with us and God bless you and yours

posted by mariaki on July 14, 2008 at 5:15 AM | link to this | reply

This touched me deeply...Your daughter is 'gifted' ~ truly has vision - This makes me want to cry ... not for sadness but for the 'depth' - Elyse

posted by elysianfields on July 13, 2008 at 9:40 PM | link to this | reply

Seriously, she is quite a talent .. this is better than a lot of poems

I've read on the poetry sites.... tell her I gave her a huge thumbs up!

posted by VictoriaP on July 13, 2008 at 9:22 PM | link to this | reply

Awesome,Yes, this poem by your daughter is so crisp and clear. She's an artist with a great imagination. A wonderfully creative writer!

posted by yellowrose55 on July 13, 2008 at 6:06 PM | link to this | reply

Wow oh wow!!!!!!!!  That is a beauty of a poem for a 10 year old to create!!!!!!  She has talent!  Bravo!

posted by NiteTide on July 13, 2008 at 5:50 PM | link to this | reply