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Hard truth...but truth nonetheless..and one I hope many ponder on
and realize that nothing gets better if we only try to ignore it. Wonderful poem
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Kobriel
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July 13, 2008
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Re: Interesting 1st line--ready for communal poem?-We can try jfm32........
here we go..................
Everyone is at war, but it feels that no one cares
to be in the state of Nature fighting to need our wants;
superficial blindness, dominating what would have been humane sensitiveness.
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__Purple_Mermaid11__
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July 12, 2008
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Interesting 1st line--ready for communal poem?
Poetry game: you already wrote 1st line; i'll write the next. then it's your turn, and we'll make rules as we go along. You're the 1st player and I'm the second. 1st game, we each write one line til poem seems to be done.
Everyone is at war, but it feels that no one cares
to be in the state of Nature fighting to need our wants
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jfm32
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July 12, 2008
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