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I liked this song as male expression
It kinda shakes the male stereotype
posted by
Straightforward
on July 12, 2008 at 8:54 PM
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Since you are now 18, does it make a real difference!? Just teasing! I like it. Lionel Richie wrote his best lyrics when he was down and out. I liked them very much! The pre-chorus was a great set up! sam
posted by
sam444
on July 12, 2008 at 12:48 PM
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So beautiful Mike
I loved it. You are right this is a song we all need. Your work is so honest, and thoughtful. Is the first line supposed to be "I've never fallen...?"
posted by
Kobriel
on July 12, 2008 at 9:14 AM
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