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You are ripping it now my friend - Excellent imagery and presentation
posted by
Smittenheimer
on July 13, 2008 at 7:51 PM
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WOW, I like the repetition of that last line...powerful and sublime. ~ This is awesome.
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on July 12, 2008 at 8:11 AM
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Re:
This is an older poem. I've got writer's block for the one I'm working on now. I had a breakthrough this afternoon, though...
posted by
Marineair
on July 11, 2008 at 9:30 PM
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Powerful and passionate. Well done.
Joe 
posted by
SFJoseph
on July 11, 2008 at 8:54 PM
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Intriguing......I couldn't help but read it like a song, and I most enjoyed that feeling!! This was great!! --I thought you had writer's block, ya liar!
posted by
NiteTide
on July 11, 2008 at 8:20 PM
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