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I'm an artist and I can see your colored

threads entertwining in my mind, leaving

me fit to serve the Lord. Welcome.


posted by Winged on July 12, 2008 at 3:02 PM | link to this | reply

I read your poem, your first entry, with keen interest, and I must say that I have liked it immensely. Welcome to the land of Blogitville. What I loved about it are the queries:

"So where upon your winters' heart are spring's rays free to fall?Where will the warmer words, like drops of rain, be free to fall?" ...

And the imagery of the soul, like a thread, lovingly nurtured and cared for, being woven into the fabric of God, getting you closer, is marvelous. This, I found quite like the explorations of the 17th century metaphysical poets. Well done, LornaDoone.

posted by Bhaskar.ing on July 11, 2008 at 8:06 PM | link to this | reply

The passion in this write is so soothing. A great balm for me and for the Lord! Thanks for stopping by my meditation blog!  sam

posted by sam444 on July 11, 2008 at 3:21 PM | link to this | reply