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Great work......
It just keeps getting better.  I look forward to reading more and thankyou for visiting my post and for your comments. HollyBird.x

posted by HollyBird on July 11, 2008 at 2:24 PM | link to this | reply

Thoroughly enjoying this latest session
I was a little concerned (originally) this might go into a super dark place that would be to uncomfortable to dwell, but those concerns are changing as this wonderful story unfolds.  Love the fox and the flashbacks.  Keep up the terrific work

posted by Smittenheimer on July 11, 2008 at 7:58 AM | link to this | reply

This is my first time here and I had to read all of your entries to...

catch up.  Very much worth it.  You write well.

Kris

posted by ChristianHorrorWriter on July 10, 2008 at 10:07 PM | link to this | reply

i like the childhood tidbit!!! It totally works.

posted by DRKnight on July 10, 2008 at 9:44 PM | link to this | reply