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An imotional rollercoster ending sadly

posted by Daf_10 on July 11, 2008 at 2:49 PM | link to this | reply

...love the use of water, the heart...storms...moon

posted by magic_moon on July 11, 2008 at 11:51 AM | link to this | reply

Purple_Mermaid, I think sometimes people learn that lesson at terrible cost.
May I ask a stupid question?  What is the purpose of posting a second time the name of a post/poem the day after the poem has been posted?  I notice several bloggers doing it. 

posted by TAPS. on July 11, 2008 at 11:22 AM | link to this | reply

drenched with love

This wet piece makes us yearn to willingly submerge beneath your flowing waters dear Lady.

posted by Smittenheimer on July 11, 2008 at 8:28 AM | link to this | reply

Nice poetry dear purple mermaid.

posted by auslander on July 11, 2008 at 7:08 AM | link to this | reply

So very beautifully done and that pic was simply marvelous to go with the feelings. My Manilian Mermaid today looks so beautiful with that crown as her title.  to you all

posted by Bhaskar.ing on July 11, 2008 at 6:22 AM | link to this | reply

Beautifully written my dear Jen............

perhaps I should seriously consider getting myself one of these vests; I have a feeling a personal storm is brewing for me; thank you for this timely verse my friend; take care of you and have a blessed weekend

posted by mariaki on July 11, 2008 at 4:35 AM | link to this | reply

Amazingly written Jen...Great job!

posted by Sinome on July 10, 2008 at 10:24 PM | link to this | reply

That's the way it feels - Again, you have voiced it perfectly.

posted by ChristianHorrorWriter on July 10, 2008 at 10:16 PM | link to this | reply

posted by 9STAR on July 10, 2008 at 9:20 PM | link to this | reply

Yes, I agree, shows a great deal of wisdom --- profound! and rich - Elyse

posted by elysianfields on July 10, 2008 at 8:34 PM | link to this | reply

Your statement is so wise .

posted by afzal50 on July 10, 2008 at 8:22 PM | link to this | reply

   I feel your emotion down, and your words float love! Excellent! Lol, BCA!  +

posted by BC-A on July 10, 2008 at 7:44 PM | link to this | reply

lovely...

the sadness was written with beauty and I loved the picture that accompanied it.

posted by dark_mistress on July 10, 2008 at 7:36 PM | link to this | reply

Jen,

So sad, yet lovely. You write so beautiful, and create such vivid pictures, dear friend!

posted by Sunnybeach7 on July 10, 2008 at 7:27 PM | link to this | reply

PM, in case you don't drop by my blog again, please drop by once more to do just a minor edit of your lovely haiku!  Thanks

posted by NiteTide on July 10, 2008 at 6:27 PM | link to this | reply

...the ending was just surprising for me!!!  This was lovely, PM, just beautifully lovely!

posted by NiteTide on July 10, 2008 at 6:17 PM | link to this | reply

Such intensity!

I was captivated

posted by Kobriel on July 10, 2008 at 5:46 PM | link to this | reply

again, wow!

"hostile domicile." i like that.

its a sad poem

posted by Luz_Briar on July 10, 2008 at 5:19 PM | link to this | reply

Luckily

we carry that life vest at all times

posted by Azur on July 10, 2008 at 5:11 PM | link to this | reply